The first step was amazing
I couldn't help but start gazing
the big planet Earth staring me in the face
what a place
the shines bright
oh the light
it's beautiful
yet so unusual
oh the colors embrace my mind
let's rewind
we took off with a three two one
it was louder than a gun.
The End
Hi Charlie,
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem! I enjoyed the rhyme scheme you have used and I like your descriptive language with emphasis on the bright, shining light you can see. I would suggest double checking your spelling before posting but otherwise this is a great post! Keep up the good work.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
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