Are zoos to be or not to be, that is the question.
This year my topic was are zoos necessary. I did well with eye contact and memorizing my speech, I also did well at being loud enough to be heard.
Next time I could work on being slower and being more clear.
Hey there Charlie, Rhys here from Grey Main school, I like your speech, it's a very different to what anyone would have imagined but ... I like it. Did you come up with this topic or did a friend bring it up? I think that maybe you could of added some pictures to support your topic. This is a really good post Charlie! Have a good day!
Hey Rhys, Charlie here, thanks for the comment. I will add in some pictures to make it more interesting, I didn't come up with this topic and nor did a friend, it actually came up from a set of topics we were given. What else do you think could improve my post? Also how long have you been doing Blogger for?
Hello Charlie, Martin from T4 here! This speech was really moving, I liked it a lot! I enjoyed how you told me multiple facts about zoos and it makes me sad to hear they're mistreating animals. Maybe next time you could change the colours a bit?
Hey Martin, charlie here from oruaiti school. Its good to know that my speech was realy moving and how it gives you an emotion. In my future posts ill try changing up the colors to make it more interesting. I only recently learned about these facts, I was also quite sad when I was learning about these facts. Have you done speeches yet, and if so what was/is your topic?
Kia Ora Charlie I am Aoife I am in T4 from Grey Main School. I really like your speech it is way better than mine. I like that you have included punctuation. Next time you could maybe put all of the bits that are about the same thing in the same spot. Have you ever been out of New Zealand? Bye.
Hey Aoife, Charlie here from Oruaiti school. Next time I will put similar parts together. I have been out of New Zealand multiple times, Ive been to Australia a few times and London once. Ive also been to PNG. My family loves traveling, the funny thing is that ive been to Australia more times then ive been to the South Island. How about you, have you ever been out of New Zealand?
Hey Charlie, Riley here from Grey Main school. I like your speech. Also I like how you added lots of facts in your slide. maybe next time you could add some pictures. Good bye from Riley
Hey Riley, Charlie here from Oruaiti School. Thanks for the complements on my work, im thinking about adding some pictures to make the viewer more interested. Also, would you think about revisiting my blog?
Hey there Charlie, Rhys here from Grey Main school, I like your speech, it's a very different to what anyone would have imagined but ... I like it. Did you come up with this topic or did a friend bring it up? I think that maybe you could of added some pictures to support your topic. This is a really good post Charlie! Have a good day!
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Hey Rhys, Charlie here, thanks for the comment. I will add in some pictures to make it more interesting, I didn't come up with this topic and nor did a friend, it actually came up from a set of topics we were given. What else do you think could improve my post? Also how long have you been doing Blogger for?
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Hello Charlie, Martin from T4 here! This speech was really moving, I liked it a lot! I enjoyed how you told me multiple facts about zoos and it makes me sad to hear they're mistreating animals. Maybe next time you could change the colours a bit?
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From Martin!
Hey Martin, charlie here from oruaiti school. Its good to know that my speech was realy moving and how it gives you an emotion. In my future posts ill try changing up the colors to make it more interesting. I only recently learned about these facts, I was also quite sad when I was learning about these facts. Have you done speeches yet, and if so what was/is your topic?
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Kia Ora Charlie I am Aoife I am in T4 from Grey Main School. I really like your speech it is way better than mine. I like that you have included punctuation. Next time you could maybe put all of the bits that are about the same thing in the same spot. Have you ever been out of New Zealand? Bye.
ReplyDeleteHey Aoife, Charlie here from Oruaiti school. Next time I will put similar parts together. I have been out of New Zealand multiple times, Ive been to Australia a few times and London once. Ive also been to PNG. My family loves traveling, the funny thing is that ive been to Australia more times then ive been to the South Island.
DeleteHow about you, have you ever been out of New Zealand?
-Charlie
Hey Charlie, Riley here from Grey Main school. I like your speech. Also I like how you added lots of facts in your slide. maybe next time you could add some pictures.
ReplyDeleteGood bye from Riley
Hey Riley, Charlie here from Oruaiti School. Thanks for the complements on my work, im thinking about adding some pictures to make the viewer more interested. Also, would you think about revisiting my blog?
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